Shot List Part Two

Shot # 4 Duration: 20 seconds	Shot # 5 Duration: 5 seconds	Shot # 6 Duration:20 seconds
Notes: Girls in background, Edwardo all walking to school, the girls start to pick on him	Notes: Snowball hits him in the face	Notes: Edwardo walks up some stairs and is picked on by three girls
Cast: Edwardo and girls	Cast: Edwardo	Cast: Edwardo Group of girls
Camera Angle: Long shot	Camera Angle: Mid shot	Camera Angle: Wide angle shot of the hall and stairs
Camera moves: Still	Camera moves: Still	Camera moves: Still

Shot List Part One

Shot # 1 Duration: 5 second	Shot # 2 Duration: 30 seconds	Shot # 3 Duration: 5 seconds
Notes: He is in a bush	Notes: Edwardo is writing in his diary	Notes: (Flash back)
Cast: Edwardo	Cast: Edwardo	Cast: Edwardo Two Stupid Girls
Camera Angle: Wide angle shot	Camera Angle: Long shot	Camera Angle: Wide shot
Camera moves: Zooms in	Camera moves: Zooms out	Camera moves: None

Shooting Schedule

Day/Date	Scene	Int/Ext Day/Night	Shot Descriptions/Summary	Location	Characters	Art Department / Equip / Special Requirements
SHOOT DAY 1 Tuesday 10th February 09
1400 – 1430	2	Ext/Day	Edwardo walking to school being laughed at	School drive	Edwardo, girl 1 and girl 2	Snow ball, School bag
Shoot day 2 Wednesday 25th February 09
0940-0950	1	Ext/Day	Shoot Edwardo in the a bush, writing on his own	Bush	Edwardo	Bush Diary Pen
Shoot day 2 - Wednesday 25th February 2009
1000-1025	5	Int/Day	Edwardo walking through the school hall being beaten up	School hallway	Edwardo, Alfred, Hannah, Head Teacher	School bag
Shoot Day 3 - Thursday 5th March 09 1040-1100 Shoot Day 3 - 1110-1200	3 4	Int/Day Int/Day	Edwardo walking through the school, being picked on Edwardo meets one of the school bullies and he takes his coat and bag from him	School hallway School Hallway	Edwardo Group of girls Edwardo Bully	Empty sweet wrapper Coat, Bag

The Second Blooper!

Thursday 12th March 2009 (What We Did!)

Today was a big editing day for me; I needed to freeze the scene where Arnie gets hit by Hannah so we could introduce her to the audience via Edwardo's voice over. After about 10 minutes of trying and failing, I got some help from Rob the Computer Man, once he had done it for me and I had got the voice over in place the group watched it backed and we thought it was better then just having Hannah walk into the shot and having the audience think "who is that?"

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Whilst I was doing that Sarah found the music we needed from www.freeplaymusic.com she got two pieces of music. The first was a rock/popy song that will be used when Edwardo gets hit by the snowball and carries on into the main titles, its used to show the comedy nature of the film.

The second was a very dramatic song that will be used when Mrs Biggs walks round the corner of the corridor and sees what’s happening, it is then cut off and we see Arnie on the floor trying to be pulled up by one of his gang members, as the scenes cut the music comes back as Mrs Biggs shouts at Hannah. She gave the tracks to me and I put them in the right place of our film and they made our film sound/look incredibly funny.

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After that was done I started on the titles. I chose a font that was colourful and looked funny/ childish, I used a different colour on every title I wrote, I used red on "The Bully" title because that's how Edwardo sees him as an angry person. There was a problem with the timing of the titles I wanted them on for long enough so the audience could read them but not on for so long that it annoyed the audience, so I decided on two seconds. The titles arrive on the screen by flying in from the sides, and some so funny movements on the screen, the titles start after the main titles have appeared because the comic font we used would have looked out of place at the start of the film which has a depressed mood to it so I decided that we should keep the funny to after the snowball hit because that is the first time the audience get a clue that the film genre is comedy. After I had finished the titles I and the rest of the group watched it back and we all felt happy because our film was completed!!

The Updated Script (Scene Three, Four & Five)

Scene Three

Three girls are in a corridor next to a staircase talking, we then see Edwardo walking up the stairs alone, when he reaches the top of the stairs the three girls spot him and start to laugh.

Girl One

Oh my god, look at him! what a loser!

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Edwardo now standing in the corridor with them stops and looks at the girls, after about a second the closest girl to him throws an empty sweet wrapper at him

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Throwing Girl

loser! (hehehe)

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It hits Edwardo in the face, he quickly walks to the end of the corridor to get away, in the background we can hear

Girl Two

(hahaha) What a loser

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As he walks away Edwardo hears what she said and turns around

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V.O Edwardo

See, no one really likes me...

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Edwardo walks out of shot and we are left we the three girls still stood laughing and talking, but now they are talking about Edwardo.

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Scene Four

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Edwardo walks into what looks like an empty corridor from his point of view, but as he gets further into the corridor we see coming from another corridor a tall, strong looking boy walking towards Edwardo. the boy sees Edwardo, Edwardo sees him

Bully

Oh! Loser!

Edwardo panics, drops his and coat and runs off, the bully runs to where Edwardo dropped his coat and picks it up

Bully

Oh! Where you going?

He runs after Edwardo. the bully quickly catches up with him and stands to watch Edwardo who is still running try and escape

Bully

If you want your coat back, get here now!

Edwardo stops running, he turns and sheepishly walks back towards the bully who is stood holding his coat up in the air. when Edwardo is stood next to the bully, he suddenly grabs Edwardo by the neck

Bully

Give me your bag! NOW!

Edwardo screams, drops his bag and runs off.

The bully starts to laugh, he then puts Edwardo's coat and bends down to pick up his bag, he puts everything on looks and himself and with a smug look on his face

Bully

Very nice

He walks off in the opposite direction acting like nothing had happened.

Scene Five

Edwardo is stood in the corridor, he is upset and looking down he doesn't see the point in going to lesson since no one notices him or likes him, so he sees no point.

A group of lads walk out a class room talking to each other. Then they notice Edwardo stood on his own.

Bully 1: Oi! You owe me money.

Edwardo: That's funny, that's what your mum said last night.

Bully 1: You what!

Hannah appears out of nowhere and punches Edwardo's bully in the face. He falls to the ground. It Freezes mid-punch and Edwardo speaks,

V.O. Edwardo: That's Hannah, she's my best... well... only friend. And. I'm secretly in love with her.

Continues...

Hannah stands there laughing whiles the other bullies are checking to see if their mate is okay, suddenly the headteacher walks round the corner.

Mrs Bigg: Miss Smith, step away from Mr Bent, and get over here now!!!!

Mrs Bigg winks at Edwardo. Edwardo shivers as he is disturbed.

V.O. Edwardo: That’s my mom (pause) she is the head teacher of this hell hole. Don't ask about the hair, it just grows and grows and grows, then it all gone.

Update - Who Did What?

I am just going to tell you how everyone is contributing to our coursework so far...

Laura: Story board, Shooting schedule, Helped with script, Helped with shot list, acting (played stupid girl one), edited the film, filmed scene three, one and two.
Sarah: Shot List, acting (played stupid girl two, Hannah)
Matt: Script, Costume, Acting(played Edwardo) and helped edit, Made tiltes
Sam: Filmed scene three on camera two, threw sticks at matt during scene one, Acting (played Bully 1)